consider spacing

04May10

everything prepared

in segments

.

triggering embrace

and craving to  be apart

.

.

yes

it is

diminishing

.

de      feat

.

while cut wrap

.

prepares

from cues

.

a challenge

.

.

.

.

except

.

first

another

.

anxiety

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One Response to “consider spacing”

  1. The spacing controlled the flow of the poem so well..very clever structure..kudos!


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